Informal Email

Dear Josh,

Thank you very much for your email. It's nice to hear from you!

Do you remember the last time we saw each other? I think it's was last July on the beach, when you came over to my place to give me a surprise.
That was terrific! We were hanging out with our gang, picking up some girls and getting a tan.

Well, I was thinking it would be great if we could repeat it this summer. Do you feel like it?

Please, let me know your thoughts about my plan and give my regards to your familiy!

I hope to see you soon.
All the best,

Peter

Good job!  Almost no mistakes.

Dear Josh, 

Thank you very much for your email. It's It was nice good to hear from you. 

Do you remember the last time that we saw each other? I think it's it was last July on the beach, when you came over to my place by to give me a surprise. That was I had a terrific time with you we were hanging out with our gang, picking up some girls, and getting a tan. Well, I was thinking that it would will be great if we could can repeat it get together again this summer. What do you feel like it? think about that idea?

Please, let me know your thoughts about my plan and
Give my regards to your familiy, and I hope to see you soon.

All the best, 

Peter

Hi Sara; I changed some of the wording. Although your letter is between two men, it was a bit feminine-sounding.