harrypotter
《Harry potter》is my favorite movie.l've already watched seven movies four times.Despite all that,l still contine to watch the movies again.l appreciate that harry potter has a sense of reponsibility and courage.l admire that he has two greatest friends in the world ,they will give all they could do to help and love potter.l think he does't feel regret to have a true friend.from 1 to 7,he is a little boy at the beginning into a mature man .He killed voldemort to save everyone's life,and bring peace.（Can you correct and polish my test,thank you )
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harrypotter
《The Harry Potter movie seris》are/The Harry Potter movies are my favorite movie. l've already have seen the whole seven seris movies four times. Despite that, l still continue to watch the movies again. l appreciate that Harry Potter has a sense of reponsibilities and courage .l admire that he has two greatest friends in the world, they will give all they could do to help and love Potter. l think he doesn't regret to have true friends. From book 1 through book 7, he is a little boy at the beginning into a mature man in the end.He killed Voldemort to save everyone's life and brought peace. （Can you correct and polish my test? Thank you. )
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