Corrections · 5
昨天做了西班牙菜
我放假了所以昨天我决定了做饭。昨天因为放假所以我决定自己在家做饭。
虽然我做饭做得不太好,有一些东西不错比如empanadas。虽然我做的饭不太好吃,但是有一些菜式做的还是不错的,比如empanadas。
empanadas是西班牙吃的东西,不是蛋糕,也不是面包,是pastry.empanadas是西班牙的一种食物,既不是蛋糕也不是面包,而是pastry。
我们在里面放肉和酱。
先应该准备pastry, 然后做filling. 做得不太难,一共一个小时过了。 做这道菜首先得准备pastry然后再做filling。做法不太难,大约需要一个多小时。
食谱:http://www.bbc.co.uk/food/recipes/chicken_and_chorizo_26918
最难是找到成分。如果你在上海住,没问题!完成这道菜最难的是找到食材,不过如果你是住在上海,那就没有问题!
Your Chinese is good, I think you could practice more, so that you can flexiably use many conjunctions to make your sentence more beautiful,such 'not only....but also...不仅...而且', 'Althogh(Though)虽然/但是, as well as也...etc.
昨天做了西班牙菜
我昨天放假了,所以我昨天决定了做饭。虽然我做饭做得不太好,有一些不错的东西,比如empanadas。empanadas是西班牙人吃的东西,不是蛋糕,也不是面包,是pastry.我们在里面放肉和酱。先应该准备pastry, 然后做filling. 做得不太难做,一共做了一个多小时过了。
食谱:http://www.bbc.co.uk/food/recipes/chicken_and_chorizo_26918
最难是找到成分。如果你在上海住,没问题!
昨天做了西班牙菜
昨天我放假了,所以昨天我决定了做饭。虽然我做饭做得不太好,但有一些东西不错,比如empanadas。empanadas是西班牙吃的东西的食品,不是蛋糕,也不是面包,是pastry.我们在里面放肉和酱。先应该准备pastry, 然后做filling. 做得不太难做,一共用了一个多小时过了。
食谱:http://www.bbc.co.uk/food/recipes/chicken_and_chorizo_26918
最难是找到成分食材。但如果你在上海住,没问题这不是问题!
写的很棒。加油。
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我昨天做了西班牙菜
我放假了,所以昨天我决定了做了饭(when we say I decided or have dicided,it usually means the action we have not done or it is will a plan。Thus,when here are some words like 昨天、前天 and 上周 which indicate the actions have already happened, you dont need to say 决定了。)。虽然我做饭做得不太好,有一些东西不错比如empanadas。empanadas是西班牙吃的东西,不是蛋糕,也不是面包,是pastry(Honestly, this sentence doesnot make sense to me,maybe you can explain it for me before I can correct it).我们在里面放肉和酱。先应该准备pastry, 然后做filling(anything put inside of bun, dumplings and breads are called 馅,you can replace filling with 馅). 做得不太难(here I believe you want to say it is not hard to do it,so I will say 很容易制作.Remember,when you use the phrase like
verb + 得+ adv,it is talking about the result of the action,not whether it is easy or hard ),一共一个小时过了(this part has a big problem with grammar. I would say 一共只用了一个小时-it only took me one hour.)。
Cheers
食谱:http://www.bbc.co.uk/food/recipes/chicken_and_chorizo_26918
最难是找到成分。如果你在上海住,没问题!
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