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A dangerous situation I love riding on my bike. Everyday, when I finished my work, I spend one and a half hour pedaling on the roads around my home. It´s the most destressing and pleasant activity I know. But, last thursday I had a terrible experience with a dog. I was riding my bike for a well known road for me. Suddenly, a enormous dog appeared on my left and begun to chase me. I pedaled than faster I could, but the dog always kept behind me. When I was really exhausted, I gave it a shout, and the dog turned around and left the persecution. I believe, is the worst experience with dogs I have never had.

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A Dangerous Situation

I love cycling. Everyday after work I spend an hour and a half cycling the roads around my home. It's the most destressing and pleasant activity I know. But last Thursday I had a terrible experience with a dog. I was cycling down a road I know well, when suddenly, an enormous dog appeared* on my left and began chasing me. I pedalled as fast as I could, but I couldn't get away. When I was really exhausted I decided to shout at the dog, and only then did it turn around and stop chasing me. I believe it's the worst experience with dogs I have ever had.

 

*You could say "appeared out of nowhere" here to really emphasise that you didn't expect to see the dog. E.g. "when suddenly, an enormous dog appeared out of nowhere and began chasing me!". This is a very common expression in the UK and Ireland.

 

¡Buen trabajo Juan! A mí me encanta hacer ciclismo también, pero eres muy afortunado porque se consique el tiempo mejor en españa.

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A Dangerous Situation

 

I live riding my bike! Every day when I finish work, I spend one and a half hours pedalling/riding on the roads around my home. It's the most de-stressing and pleasant activity I know. However, last Thursday I had a terrible experience with a dog. I was riding my bike along a familiar road. Suddenly, an enormous dog appeared on my left and began to chase me. I pedalled as fast as I could, but the dog kept up with me. When I was really exhausted, I shouted at it, and the dog turned around and gave up the chase/pursuit. I believe that was the worst experience I have ever had with dogs!

 

Great job! Hope this helps....

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A dangerous situation

I love riding on my bike. Everyday, when I finished my work, I spend one and a half hours cycling on the roads around my home. It´s the most destressing and pleasant activity I know. But, last thursday I had a terrible experience with a dog. I was riding my bike for on a well known road for me. Suddenly, an enormous dog appeared on my left and began to chase me. I pedaled than faster as fast as I could, but the dog always kept stayed behind me. When I was really exhausted, I gave it a shouted, and the dog turned around and left the persecution stopped chasing me. I believe that this was is the worst experience with dogs I have never had.

 

 

well done

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