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Once upon time... Once upon time, in a little village was a little boy that needs to live everyday like the last.... Most of the time story tales start with a this kind of intro and have a happy end, but our life don't always have a happy end. In the last couple of years I can say that I fought for live and many people can think that I won, but for me It was just a battle not the completely war... I was diagnosed in the last year with a something that is not a give issue but for my appearance it does. In other words I'm becoming white (vitiligo) like my favorite singer who is also know as The King of Pop. It will sound funny but the last year I have started to listen him again. I'm 21 and I have many health issues but I don't complaint to anybody. I am not sad, either. Instead, I feel happy that even all the obstacles that life gives me. I am study abroad and I want to become mature. Live the life the fullest and smile. I love to write because in this way I can show that I am just a human and not a rock that I can fall down too but stand up again, maybe one day someone will read this and he or she won't feel alone. I am still alive :) You are not alone, I am here with you (8) I will start a treatment for this in the coming weeks. All can say what god want, It will be.

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Once upon time...

Once upon time, in a little village there was a little boy that needs who had to live every day like it was the his last...

Most of the time story tales start with a this kind of an intro and have a happy ending, but our life lives don't always havea happy endings. In the last couple of years I can say that I fought for live life. and Many people can think that I won, but for me it was just a battle, not the completelya war...
Last year I was diagnosed in the last year with a something that is not a give big issue, but for my appearance it does is.

In other words, I'm becoming white (I have vitiligo) like my favorite singer, who is also known as The King of Pop. It will sound funny, but the last year I have started to listening to him again. I'm 21 and I have many health issues but I don't complaint to anybody. I am not sad, either. Instead, I feel happy that even inspite of all the obstacles that life gives me. I am studying abroad and I want to become mature, to live the life to the fullest and smile.

I love to write because in this that way I can show that I am just a human being and not a rock; that I can fall down too but stand up again. Maybe one day someone will read this and he or she won't feel alone. I am still alive :)

You are not alone, I am here with you (8)

I will start a treatment for this in the coming weeks. All I can say is that it will be as God wants it to be.

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Once upon time...

Once upon time, in a little village was a little boy that needs to live everyday like the last....

Most of the time story tales start with a this kind of intro and have a happy ending, but our lifeves don't always have a happy ending. In the last couple of years I can say that I fought for livfe and many people (can) think that I won, but for me Iit was just a battle not the completely/whole war...
I was diagnosed in the last year with a something that is not a give (do you mean big?) issue but for my appearance it doesis.

In other words I'm becoming white (vitiligo) like my favorite singer who is also know as The King of Pop. It will sound funny but the last year I have started to listen him again. I'm 21 and I have many health issues but I don't complaint (about it) to anybody. I am not sad, either. Instead, I feel happy that even all the obstacles that life gives me (this sentence doesn't quite make sense). I am going to study abroad and I want to become mature. Live the life to the fullest and smile.

I love to write because in this way I can show that I am just a human and not a rock; that I can fall down too but stand up again, maybe one day someone will read this and he or she won't feel alone. I am still alive :)

You are not alone, I am here with you (8)

I will start a treatment for this in the coming weeks. All I can say, is that what gGod wants, It will be.

 

 

Good luck with your treatment!

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