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Family As is vividly shown in the picture,the word family represents three people,who are father,mother and I.When I was young,father was the most important person in my family.Where there is my father,there is the sense of security.He applied himself year in year out to the work for providing my family with a better living. While my mother did her utmost to assist my father in family chores.She made sure I eat well and wear warm,rendering my family brighten and happier,much the way an umbrella fends off wind and rain. As times passes by, I grow up little by little.In the lovely and violent contrast with me, my parents become older and weaker. What’s worse, some diseases go down to them, my dad even lean heavily on his crutches. I come to realize that my aged parents are no longer free to hold up the family. It’s high time for me to take over the responsibility and shoulder the burdens. The pictures reflect a truth that Word Family means ‘dad and mom, I love you!’ Nothing can be compared, I think, family is a warm harbor whose door is eternally open for me wherever I go.Therefore, respecting them is of vital importance. Not only should we relate to them, but also endeavor to avoid setting off the conflicts. None the less, what we can do is to go to great lengths to spare more time to accompany them and sharing more houseworks. There is a long way to go, but the reward will paid for the price.

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Family
As is vividly shown in the picture (What picture?),the word family represents three people; These people are my father, my mother and I. When I was young, my father was the most important person in my family. Where there is a father, there is a sense of security. He applied himself year in year out to working for providing my family with a better living. While my mother did her utmost to assist my father in family chores. She made sure I ate well and was warm making my family bright and happy, much the way an umbrella fends off wind and rain. (This doesn't really make sense.)
As time passed by, I grew up little by little. My parents became older and weaker. What’s worse, they contracted diseases, and my dad leans heavily on his crutches now. I came to realize that my aged parents are no longer free to hold up the family. It’s high time for me to take over the responsibility and shoulder the burdens.
The pictures reflect a truth that the word 'Family' means ‘dad and mom, I love you!’ Nothing can be compared to this, I think. Family is a warm harbor whose door is eternally open for me wherever I go.Therefore, respecting them is of vital importance. Not only should we relate to them, but also endeavor to avoid fighting with them. I thin what we should do is to go to great lengths to spare more time to accompany them and take more of the housework from them. There is a long way to go, but there is a reward to be had for the extra trouble of helping them more.

 

There. I corrected it quickly, so I am not sure it is right. I seems correct though.

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