Who can help me correct this article ,i want more native one .(help one student correct)
Hi my name is TINA
I’m nine years old
I like eating fruit
I also like singing and learning English
My favorite color is white
I love my father and mother
I love my little brother too
Now I have a short story for you
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Who can help me correct this article ,i want more native one .(help one student correct)
Hi my name is TINA Tina.
I’m nine years old.
I like eating fruit.
I also like singing and learning English.
My favorite color is white.
I love my father and mother.
I love my little brother, too.
Now I have a short story for you.
Hmmmm. It's not really an "article" -- I would just say: "Who can help me correct these sentences?"
Other than that, you really just need to put periods after them (and a comma after "brother"), as otherwise they're gramatically correct. Also, we usually don't capitalize names (just the first letter), so, "Tina" looks more natural than TINA. (:
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You're welcome. Not sure I understand the question 100%. We say "native" to refer to one who has the English ability of someone who grew up in an English-speaking country. In your example we might just say "please correct my English" or "does this English sound natural?" or "is this the way a native speaker of English would say it?" or something like that...
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Thank u !!!! you are so kind! Is it native? always "I....."""I....." is it good?
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