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My son's Birthday
Today is my son’s second birthday, according to the Chinese Lunar Calendar. He is at my hometown, living with his mother and grandparents. The environment with very little pollution does not have much pollution and is a an ideal place for him. Plus, I need a quiet moment for my English-studying. But I am in Beijing, so we are not together now. A few days ago, my traded I bought a nice scooter that he wanted from online for his birthday. Although I miss my son very much all day, I still insist on staying in Beijing to prepare for the test until I get a desire desired/ the required score I need. My wife called me this morning to remind me about our son’s birthday. I had not realized it because I had no sense forgotten about of the Lunar Calendar.
Two years ago, my son was born and enabled me to become I became a father. I have changed a lot since then, For instance, I always take my unclear family into consideration when I make important decisions when they are unclear. For example, I plan to move to other developed countries mainly because I want to create a friendly environment for my children to grow up in.
Very nice job. You are on your way to talking with native fluency. You only need to practice a few different ways to pronounce sentences to make it more clear for people to listen to. If you get these down, you will sound very well-spoken and can communicate perfectly. I wish you luck with your test as well. You have come very far in English and you are doing very well.
My son's Birthday
Today is my son’s second birthday according to the Chinese Lunar Calendar. He is at my hometown, living with his mother and grandparents. The environment with has very little pollution and is a ideal place for him. Plus, I need a quiet moment some peace and quiet for my English study. But I am in Beijing, so we are not together now. A few days ago, my traded I bought a nice scooter online that he wanted for his birthday. Although I miss my son very much all day, I still insist on staying in Beijing to prepare for the test until I get a desired score. My wife called me this morning to remind me of our son’s birthday. I had not realized it because I had no sense of the Lunar Calendar.
Two years ago, my son was born and enabled me to become a father. I have changed a lot since then; for instance, I always take my unclear nuclear (is that what you meant??) family into consideration when I make important decisions. For example, I plan to move to other developed countries mainly because I want to create a friendly environment for my children to grow up in.
How sweet, I hope he had a great birthday! He's really a big boy now! My kids love their scooters.
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