Flowers in the Attic by C.V. Andrews, Sugar Queen by Sarah Addisson Allen

Have you ever read this book?  What the expressions have got? (Sorry, but I don't understand this sentence.) To be honest I've read it in one breath! And I was drammatically surprised to know the conclusion of the story! (And is a conjunction, and should be used between phrases in the same sentence, not at the beginning.) I am a mother myself, and can't even imagine to treat to my children in such a way! I think really there are there really people who value money more than the lives of their own little children, who love you them so much! For me reading of this book was enough to make me weep!

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Last week I started reading Sugar Queen by Sarah Addison Allen. What do you know about it? Is it worth of my time?
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What book could you advice me? I don't have some frames any limitations in my reading tastes, because there is in any gеnre both interesting and boring book.
So thank you for your attention, I'll will be grateful for any answer!

You have problems with punctuations and spaces. Look at the following link.

http://www.englishclub.com/writing/punctuation-comma.htm

You have 10 punctuation space errors, and if you study that page, you'll get the idea how it works.

Your text is interesting and well constructed. Unfortunately, I only read scientific reports in sciences, so I can't help you much. Keep writing.