eventually i come back home(my english is poor,please check my test thank u)
i‘m going to college，we have to live in dormitory。when weekend is coming ，i miss my family so much。but today，i came back home。i see my parent eventually，delious dinner is waitting for me .l satisfy with it.
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做得好！Good work!
I'm going to college where have to live in a dormitory. when weekend is coming Over the weekend I miss my family so much. Today, I came back home i to see my parents eventually. Delious dinner is waitting waiting for me. l satisfy with it.
"When weekend is coming" doesn't sound natural. In UK we say "At the weekend" and in the US often "On the weekend".
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好的 我会努力的
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不要说my English is poor 外国人一般不喜欢中国人这种说法，感觉好像英语不好无所谓的一样，还有看起来没有自信。
交际中比较建议的说法是
My English isn't 100%fluent,but I am trying to improve it.
加油吧
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Eventually I came home(my english is poor,please check my test thank u)
Beacuse I'm a college student now and I have to live in dormitory. I'll miss my family very much when weekend come.But today，I finally came home.I see my parents eventually，delicious dinner is waiting for me .I'm satisfy with it.
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好的
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