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Colombia flagIbeth Rojas
E-ciggaretes The e-cigarettes smokers can keep their satisfaction for the nicotine, also the it reduce the levels of combustion and pollution, but the taxes for this industry can keep, I think is necessary to face the situation and improve people’s style life, well the e-cigarettes decrease the pollution, it don’t helps consumers, their life isn’t important for the industry and year in year death millions of people for this cause, the solution isn’t stop or change the cigarettes we can to see other alternatives and create a best culture for the healthy.

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E-ciggaretes

The E-cigarettes smokers can keep their satisfaction from for the nicotine, and also the it reduce the levels of combustion and pollution, but the taxes for this industry should remain can keep., I think this is necessary to face the situation and improve people’s lifestyle style life, and while well the e-cigarettes decrease the pollution, they it don’t helps consumers., Their life isn’t important to for the industry, and year after in year (or "year in, year out") death millions of people die because of cigarettes/die due to cigarettes. for this cause., The solution isn’t to stop or change the cigarettes- we can find to see other alternatives and create a better best culture of health for the healthy.

 

Good job- they are certainly controversial.

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