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My trip to Belém In the last days I traveled to Belém from Pará, Brazil. The city is very exacting and full of culture. I spend a couple of days withs my aunt and my uncle, her wife and my little cousin. Me and my twist sister find out a lot of museum, history buildings. Most of party of my trip I used the bus, the sun was everyday so hot and intense that me, my sister and my aunt used the bus to go around the city. I walking too around the river, Amazon River. In this walking me and a group of people fought out a lot crabs, black crabs, who adapted to river's stone. This trip was so important to become everything about the stuff who happing about my life more exciting and beatiful.

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My trip to Belém

In the last couple days I traveled to Belém from Pará, Brazil. The city is very exacting exciting and full of culture. I spend spent a couple of days withs with my aunt and my uncle, her wife and my little cousin. Me and my twist sister find out my twin sister and I found a lot of museums and history buildings. Most of party of my trip I used the bus. The sun was everyday so hot and intense so hot and intense every day that me, my sister and my aunt used the bus to go around the city. I walking too also walked around the Amazon river, Amazon River. In this walking While we were walking me and a group of people fought out off a lot of crabs, black crabs, who had adapted to river's stone. This trip was so important to become everything about the stuff who happing about my life more exciting and beatiful.

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My trip to Belém

In the past few days my sister and I travelled to Belém from Pará, Brazil (or...In the past few days I travelled to Belém from Pará, Brazil with my sister). It was so exciting to see the different cultures in the city. We spent a couple of days with my aunt, my uncle, and my little cousin. My twin sister and I found a lot of museum, and historical buildings. Since the sun was out most of the time making the weather so hot,  we went around the city by the bus. I have walked by the Amazon River, too. I, with a group of other people, found a lot of black crabs by the river stones. This trip means so much to me. It makes life more exciting and wonderful!

 

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My trip to Belém

In the last days I travelled to Belém from Pará, Brazil. The city is very exaciting and full of culture. I spent a couple of days withs my aunt and my uncle, his wife and my little cousin. Me and my twist sister found out a lot of museum, history buildings. Most of party of my trip I used the bus, the sun was  so hot  everyday and intense that me, my sister and my aunt used the bus to go around the city. I was  walking too around the river, Amazon River. In this walking me and a group of people fought out a lot crabs, black crabs, which  adapted to river's stone. This trip was so important to become everything about the stuff that  happing about my life more exciting and beatiful.

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