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when can i meet my prince charming recently my parents always have pushed me to find a boyfriend . i feel so upset. why is generation gap with them so big . how old i am need to find a boyfriend in such a hurry!!i have to work everyday what is more there are not boys around me .my all friends are girls . i do not know when i can meet my prince charming .

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Recently my parents always have been pushing me to get a boyfriend and I feel so upset. Why is generation gap with them so big  a big deal for them? (What do you want to say here? I think you should have added some details using transitional words, such as in the contrary, likewise, nevertheless, by all means, etc. to make the implied context clearer to the readers) how old i am need to find a boyfriend in such a hurry!!I am still too young to be in a hurry getting a boyfriend. (Or you might want to say "I am still too young to have a boyfriend.") I have to work everyday and unfortunately, what is more there are no boys around me; all of my friends are girls. I do not know when I can will I be able to meet my prince charming.

 

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