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it doesn't make sense to me
Why do a lot of adults in this little town put down kids who are not so 'lively' ? Like everyone has their own personality.They just don't like to shout. Those kids are usually steady in their purpose. They have their own way to have fun as well. There is nothing wrong with kids enjoying silence.
Hi. This looks really good. Even the colloquial use of "Like" is fine. An interesting perspective. I thought adults liked kids being quiet!
it doesn't make sense to me
Why do a lot of adults in this little town put down kids who are not so 'lively' ? Like everyone has their own personality.They just don't like to shout. Those kids are usually steady in their purpose. They have their own way to have fun as well. There is nothing wrong with kids enjoying silence.
Brilliantly written!
And I fully agree, I was one of those kids )
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