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A Kid inside a Man. Everyday walking on the streets sometimes is just boring… but If you try to see it through the Kid’s eyes. Will it be different? For me is… YES!. Everyday that I need to go to somewhere or while I am at home, I try to see everything like a kid… Of course I matured in this couple of years, but what I mean Every time that a situation appears to be so hard and difficult, I try to see it with the kid’s eyes and it looks like a game or an adventure and It isn’t stressful. For example when I am in the stress walking to the Renfe (Subway) and think that the trees are saying Hello! Luis! Good morning! and I try to walking in the same rhythm of bird’s sing. It’s is SO FUNNY for me hahaha!. I laugh and smile and the people maybe think that I am crazy hahaha!. Another Example is while in the Renfe and I think… I am in a Spaceship and, I am the Capital and the people around there are the passengers which I must save them from the monster outside the doors. I am crazy, I know… but I try to dream and smile everyday like a kid. I am applying to be Volunteer in a Children’s Hospital in Barcelona and I am writing little story tales for it.

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A Kid inside a Man.

 

Everyday, walking on the streets, sometimes it is just boring. If you try to see it through a kid’s eyes will it be different? For me … YES!. Everyday that I need to go somewhere, or while I am at home, I try to see everything like a kid… Of course I matured in the past couple of years. What I mean is that every time that a situation appears to be so hard and difficult, I try to see it with a kid’s eyes and it looks like a game or an adventure and it isn’t stressful. For example when I am stressed walking to the Renfe (Subway) and think that the trees are saying "Hello! Luis! Good morning!" and I try to walk in the same rhythm as the bird’s sing. It’s SO FUNNY for me hahaha!. I laugh and smile and the people maybe think that I am crazy hahaha!. Another example is while in the Renfe and I think… I am in a Spaceship and, I am in the Capital and the people around there are the passengers which I must save from the monster outside the doors. I am crazy, I know… but I try to dream and smile everyday like a kid.

I am applying to be a volunteer in a children’s hospital in Barcelona and I am writing little story tales for it.

 

 

- I like this story!

- Use capitolization for the first word in a sentence and for proper nours. So the name of a specific person, place or thing. For ex. hospital is not capitolized (because it could be any hospital) but St. Mary Hospital would be.(because it is a name)

-highlight when I changed something and red words when I added words.

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