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Letter of complaint Hi. I wrote a letter of complaint (not official). Can you correct me? Dear Sir, I am writing to draw your attention to the staff in your shop, ''CONDOR''. On 25th April I visited your shop because I wanted to buy a pair of shoes and I asked the girl to help me but she said that I can look by myself because she has had a bad day. I understand this but I don't get why when I wanted to ask her the price of an item she was talking to the phone and laughing and of course she has ignored me. I think this attitude doesn't match with the motto of your shop and it doesn't satisfy the customers as me. So, I hope you'll do something about this problem and at next visit I'll find a better service of the staff. Yours faithfully, Natalia. P.S. Thank you!

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Letter of complaint

Hi. I wrote a letter of complaint (not official). Can you correct me?

Dear Sir,

I am writing to you to draw your attention to the staff in your shop, ''CONDOR''.
On 25th April I visited your shop because I wanted to buy a pair of shoes and I asked the girl to help me but she said that I can look by myself because she has had a bad day. I understand this but I don't get why when I wanted to ask her the price of an item she was talking on the phone and laughing whilst ignoring me. I think this attitude doesn't match with the ethos of your shop and it doesn't satisfy customers such as myself. 

So, I hope you'll do something about this problem and upon my next visit I'll experience better customer service from your staff.


Yours faithfully,
Natalia.



P.S. Thank you!

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