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My impressive expericence I went to watch a CCTV program yesterday. It was my first time to see this kind of program thus I was very interested in it at first.It took us nearly 2 hours to arrive at our destination. We reached there tired and sleepy.What's worse, we had to wait on line against the sun until the stuff allowed us to get in. An hour or so later, we entered the performing hall.We were asked to sit still and don't make any noise. I saw the famous compere and the well-known chinese film director-Ninghao, which made me delighted.Regardless of our four-hour staying in the hall.

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My impressive expericence

I went to watch a CCTV program yesterday. It was my first time to see this kind of program so I was very interested in it at first. It took us nearly 2 hours to arrive at our destination. We reached there tired and sleepy. The worst part was we had to wait in line in the sun until the security person(not sure what you mean by stuff here) allowed us to get in. An hour or so later, we entered the performing hall. We were asked to sit still and don't make any noise. I saw the famous compere and the well-known chinese film director-Ninghao, which made me delighted. Regardless of our four-hour staying in the hall.

 

Good Job Clara. few errors.. keep on writing..

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