Project: writing about a film I recently watched ( continue)
Katniss and Peeta are together stil the end, but Beetee's plan segregate them to each other. Katniss is launch an arrow, which is attached to a wire, and when a lightning struck into the wire the whole energy field blows up. After that, Haymitch save Katniss, Finnick and Beetee and the escape to District 13. But Peeta and Johanna are taken by the Capitol.
I like this film, because there's special effects, great actors and good songs. I recommend it, because this film is about real emotions, true friendships, loves and fight for the truth.
that's all! PLS HELP ME SOON!!!
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Project: writing about a film I recently watched ( continue)
Katniss and Peeta are together til the end, but Beetee's plans segregate them from each other. Katniss launched an arrow, which was attached to a wire, and when lightning struck into the wire the whole energy field blew up. After that, Haymitch saved Katniss, Finnick and Beetee and they escaped to District 13. But Peeta and Johanna are taken by the Capitol.
I like this film, because there's special effects, great actors and good songs. I recommend it because this film is about real emotions, true friendships, loves and fighting for the truth.
- my main suggestion is to make sure your tenses (past tence, present tense, present progressive etc) are matching and correct.
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hi，i am Chinese . i think we can be friends.
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and remember "pls" is a version of spelling please that is only correct online, in text messages, and in notes between close friends. It's a slang type of spelling.
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I also enjoyed the movie. :)
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