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My friend Quennie Hi, I'm Hiro. Yesterday was very fun! Because, I can be new friend. Her name is quennie She is very cute and kind I want to talk to her more. But, I can't speak English well... So, I want to study English more. Someday, I want to be able to speak English well!! Then, I enjoy talking with my friend more

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A lot of people already corrected your entry :D

Because, I can be new friend. <----- Because I have a new friend.

Then, I enjoy talking with my friend more <--------So I can enjoy talking with my friends more.

 

Names should always be capitalized :D


Nice work Hiro :D

 

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My friend Quennie

Hi, I'm Hiro. Yesterday was a lot of fun! Because, I made new friend. Her name is quennie She is very cute and kind. I want to talk to her more, but, I don’t speak English well… Therefore, I want to study more English. Someday, I want to be able to speak English well!! Then, I can enjoy talking with my friend more

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My friend Quennie

Hi, I'm Hiro.
Yesterday was very fun because I made a new friend.
Her name is Quennie.
She is very cute and kind
I want to talk to her more.
But, I can't speak English well...
So, I want to study English more.
Someday, I want to be able to speak English well!!
Then, I will enjoy talking with my friend more.

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