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Informal Invitation Letter Hi Raquel How are the things? I hope all is well. I am writing to invite you to our 10th wedding anniversary which we are celebrating (the) next 20th, June. On this special occasion we are hired a burguer bar where we are going to have a lot of beers and fun, besides we will enjoy with a karaoke at 23 p.m. I heard that you broke up with Tom.What about if you come with your new guy we are eager of meeting him. I really hope you can come.let me know if you’ll be able to make it by 15 June. I must have a firm idea of the guest to communicate the burguer responsible. Good luck with your new couple Lots of love

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Informal Invitation

Hi Raquel,

How's things? I hope all is well. I'm writing to invite you to our 10th wedding anniversary which we are celebrating on the 20th of June 2014.


For this special occasion we've hired out a burger bar and organised karaoke until eleven o'clock, so there will be plenty of good food, drink, and fun times for all. 

I'm sorry to hear that you broke up with Tom. What about if you bring your new guy instead? We're all very eager to meet him.

I really hope you can make it. I need a fairly good idea of how many people are coming by the 15th of June, so if you can reply before that date it would be much appreciated.

Good luck with your new partner, and we hope to see you soon.

Lots of love,


Fernando & "insert wife's name here".


¡Buen trabajo!

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Your invitation is completely understandable as written. I am just suggesting some informal American English substitutions.
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Informal Invitation Letter

Hi Raquel

How are the things? I hope all is well. I am writing to invite you to our 10th wedding anniversary which we are celebrating next June 20th.

 

On this special occasion we will rent a burger bar where we are going to have a lot of beer and fun, including karaoke at 11 p.m. I heard that you broke up with Tom. Why not come with your new guy? We are eager to meet him!

I really hope you can come! If you’ll be able to make it, let me know by June 15th. I must have a firm idea of the number of guests to tell the burger bar manager.

Good luck with your new guy!
Lots of love

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