《The Wolf of Wall Street》

Today I watched the movie《The Wolf of Wall Street》, that's so crazy!
Leonardo played fantastic!
I don't understand why they are so obsessed with money, I think there are is a lot of fun in live life except money!
Though Money is important , but not too important, I think!
Have a good life!
sunshine, sky, parent, children, partner, and friends~~~that 's These are more important than money!

Very nice job! I like your point of view! It is very nice to see that not everyone is obsessed with money these days. I think your English is quite fluent. There are only a few things that needed correction, such as capitals, commas, and different words. I would make sure to practice sentences maybe you know you had trouble with to get a better understanding of using the words. Great job!