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Music! I really like to listen music. When i was a child i used to listen electronic music, later i liked more rock music. In that time, i was the tipical guy who likes to wear dark clothes, used a piercing (only one), and i used to go to rock's concerts. Now, i still like rock music, but I prefer pop music or alternative music, maybe because rock music is not like before, or I've changed. And my piercing is now stored in my drawer of my memories. Well, it's time to listen good music!

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Music!

I really like to listen music.

When I was a child I used to listen electronic music, later I liked more rock music more. In that time, I was the tipical guy who liked likes to wear dark clothes, had used a piercing (only one), and I used to go to rock's concerts.

Now, I still like rock music, but I prefer pop music or alternative music, maybe because rock music is not like before, or I've changed. And my piercing is now stored in my drawer of my memories.

Well, it's time to listen good music!

 

Buen trabajo.

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Music!

I really like to listen music.

When I was a child I used to listen to electronic music. When I became older, I preferred rock music. During that time, I was the typical guy who liked to wear dark clothes, had a piercing (only one) and went to rock concerts.

These days, I still like rock music, but prefer pop music or alternative music, perhaps because rock has changed. Or maybe I've changed.  As for my piercing, it is now stored in my drawer of my memories. 


Well, it's time to listen good music!

 

Nicely written, Luis!

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Music!

I really like to listen music.

When I was a child I used to listen electronic music, later i liked rock music more. At that time, i was the tipical guy who liked to wear dark clothes, wear a piercing (only one), and go to rock's concerts. 


Nowadays, I still like rock music, but I prefer pop or alternative music, maybe this is because rock music is not like it was before, or I've changed. My piercing is now stored in my drawer of my memories.

Well, it's time to listen to good music!

 

 

Great job! 

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Music!

 

I really like to listen to music.

When I was a child I used to listen to electronic music, later I liked more rock music more. In that time, I was the tipical typical guy who likes to wear wore dark clothes, used had a piercing (only one), and i used to go went to rock's concerts.

Now, I still like rock music, but I prefer pop music or alternative music,. This may be because rock music is not like before, or I've changed. And my My piercing is now stored in my memory drawer of my memories.

Well, it's Time to listen to good music!

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