My holiday
A few days ago ,I went go to Xi'an,but the city has been raining .Plans have been disrupted，I have some disappointment！Maybe I should think of some fun things,
Such as family together .any way ,I need to put to work, and look forward to the next holiday now.
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My holiday
A few days ago ,I went go to Xi'an,but it has been raining in the city. Plans have been disrupted. I am very disappointed! Maybe I should think of some fun things to do, like hanging out with my family. any way, I need to start working, and I look forward to the next holiday now.
Be careful when changing beteeen tenses, like I "went" to Xi'an and plans "have been" disrupted. Try snd stay with one tense. Maybe you could say plans "were" disrupted or "it was raining" in the city. Good luck! :)
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Great job! Be careful about your punctuation, and keep it up!
My holiday
A few days ago ,I went to go to Xi'an, but the city has been raining. Plans have been disrupted，I have some disappointment and I am dissapointed! Maybe I should think of some fun things, such as family get together. Any way, I need to put get to work, and I look forward to the next holiday now.
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