BEADHOUSE PROJECT [PLEASE MAKE IT MORE IDIOMATIC]

Plz make this passage more idiomatic!!! Cuz I'm going to send it to an English native speaker!!!
ANYWHERE you look it is weird please correct it without mercy!
THANKS A BUNCH!


Chongyang is coming up. We are planning to visit a beadhouse to celebrate the special day and we hope you will be able to accept our invite to visit with us.
First off, let me introduce the plan we made. When we get there, we will visit the elderly in their rooms (in groups), presenting them with flowers and self-made cards to show our respect and love. Then we will do some cleaning and washing with the help of the nurses.
As some old people feel lonely, we may chat with them about their old days, changes of our city, or anything they are interested in. We may also give them some performances: singing, dancing, etc.
I am sure we will both gain a better understanding of the elderly in China. If you have any suggestions, please let us know.
Looking forward to your early reply.

Yeah that's good Tony, they'll be happy to read that!