The new town park
My city is very well! Today I have visited the new park. It is beautiful and rich of people. There are many play for children. The park was built by the old mayor. Many people use it for jogging. Today morning I went jogging in the park.
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The new town park
My city is great! Today I have visited the new park. It is beautiful and full of people. There are many places to play for children. The park was built by the former mayor. Many people use it for jogging. This morning I went jogging in the park.
Nice paragraph Tommaso! I made a few suggestions and corrections to make you sound more like a native speaker. Let me know if you have any questions!
-Mary
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