Search from various English teachers...
[Deleted]
Letters Yesterday night, I just felt like writing a letter to my friend. Although I was supposed to reply to her, I had not. I had almost forgotten it. When I remembered to write her back, I started to write as much as I can like I was waiting for this moment. It has been a while since I wrote a letter to someone. After I was done, I just retrospected that I used to write letters to my best friend. I have not known how she is doing currently, so I wrote her a letter improvisely. Today, I visited post office. I imagined my friends' countenances and their surprise. They might notice my yearning for them. A letter is very peculiar. It gives expectations and pleasant flutter to both giver and taker. Even if technologies should develop more convenient medium of contacts, It would never exceed a letter.

Corrections · 2

1

Letters

Last night, I just felt like writing a letter to my friend. Although I was supposed to reply to her, I had not. I had almost forgotten it. When I remembered to write her back, I started to write as much as I could like I was waiting for this moment. It had* been a while since I wrote a letter to someone. After I was done, I just thought back on how I used to write letters to my best friend. I didn't know how she was doing, so I wrote her a letter impulsively*2.

Today, I visited the post office. I imagined my friends' countenances and their surprise. They might notice my yearning for them. A letter is very peculiar, it gives expectations and pleasant feelings(*3) to both giver and taker.
Even though technologies have developed more convenient ways to contact people, they will never replace a letter.

 

* "has" isn't wrong but the rest of the note is in the past tense.

*2 Not quite sure what you're trying to say here. I think you could also use "spontaneously".

*3 Again, I'm not sure what you're saying with flutter.

 

I liked this a lot! I'm also fond of writing letters and also often forget to do so.

Want to progress faster?

Join this learning community and try out free exercises!

Don’t miss out on the opportunity to learn a language from the comfort of your own home. Browse our selection of experienced language tutors and enroll in your first lesson now!

Start Learning Today