a day to remember

We had not met for a while until before Nini came back to China. But we were going to met at a place named "the coffee bean" tonight. I was arrived there frist and then I saw her when she came into the shop. She gave me a big hug, that is really overwhelmed me. I could even smell the perfume of her. We sat down and started to talked. Of course, we also ordered a lot to eat. She told me that she was not happy in the at work, she was getting tired of the paperwork. She meant that every day she put on make up for the computer, she dressed up for the computer, she cut the her hair for the computer. She wanted to change, she wanted to communicated with people face to face. I could even see the tears in her eyes at that moment, and I understood her feelings, because I was also thinking about that over and over again recently.as her friend, I was tried to solace her and told her everything will be ok.and it seemed to work.there is also a drama also happened, her she had hit her head accidently.it seemed very painful, but I could do nothing at that moment, I just wanted to hold her in my arm, she was so brave to have traveled so far to here, I think she deserved better than that, and i hope bad things will never happen to her. unfortunately night isn't eternal, so i should had to return home. I walked her home and she hugged me again saying goodbye, I was on seventh heaven.these years, I often recall her and think about what a great girl she was.

Notes:  please use capital letters at the beginning of every sentence.  Also, at the end of each sentence you need to put a period (.), not just a comma (,).  And "I" is always written in capital letters, never "i".  Additionally, when writing about the past, you need to use the past tense.

And now for the good news!  Your vocabulary is very good and you wrote the story in an interesting way.  If you make those easy grammatical improvements, you are well on your way to writing English very well :).