Broken Dreams

It (or I was in high school...) was in high school when I lived apart from my family for the first time. I had longed to live independently from my parents. After receiving the entrance permission being accepted by the school (or passing the entrance exam or rceiving an invitation to join the school) I felt like I had everything I wanted. I was waiting for the day when my new school life began (or would begin).

However, my pleasure broke soon waned (or My dreams/illusions were soon shattered). I had often dreamed of talking with friends, debating over the academic problems, and listening to their dreams and private matters hopes/fears up till until late. The reality was totally different. I could not study until late, because I was constantly interfered with distracted by the dorm's noisy atmosphere. Above all, the girls (or my roommates) began to speak ill of some friends behind their backs. I did not want to talk say anything about them (or I didn't want to talk to them - the girls who are saying bad things). I was overloaded with study and they did not deserve to be talked about in that way (these two ideas do not really connect). So, I rather went to bed (or I would rather go to bed or I just went to bed). The dormitory ended up changing from my dream place to just a room with my bed(or "a bed"). Besides only a few friends, I did not have anyone to rely on. When I felt exhausted in my mind (or mentally exhausted), I realized that how much my family backed me up.

I sometimes think, what if I met many friends I could believe in, the dorm was full of academic atmosphere, and I did not meet those mean girls. (I sometimes wonder what would have happened if I had met many friends I could believe in, the dorm was full of academic atmosphere, and I did not hadn't meet met those mean girls - this is a better way of saying it). However, I finally must have realized the importance of family and that independence is not easy. if I was not ready in any cases. (and also that in any case I was not ready for it)
There is no perfect place I dream of (now). Even if everything I considered mee.t my demands, there must be another problems that I have never thought of. I do not regret. (Even if I find somewhere that meets all my demans (or requirements) there will be other problems I haven't thought of). I don't regret (You should say what you don't regret).

Well done. You are using quite complex sentences.

Broken Dreams

It was back in high school when I lived apart from family for the first time. I had longed to live independently from my parents. After receiving the entrance permission, I felt like I had everything I wanted. I was until the day when my new school life began! 

However, my pleasure was broke soon. I often dreamed of talking with friends, debating over academic problems, and listening to their dreams and private matters up till late. The reality was totally different. I could not study until late because I was constantly interfered with the dorm's noisy atmosphere. Above all, the girls began to speak ill of some friends behind their backs and I did not want to say anything about them. I was overloaded with studying, and they did not deserve to be talked in that way. So I would rather end up going to bed. The dormitory ended up changing my dream place to just a room with my bed. Besides only a few friends, I did not have anyone to rely on. When I felt exhausted in my mind, I realized how much my family backed me up.

I sometimes think, what if I met many friends I could trust in, the dorm was full of academic atmosphere, and fortuantly I did not meet those mean girls. However, I finally must have realized the importance of family and that independence is not easy if I was not ready in any cases.
There is no perfect place I can dream of. Even if everything I've considered have met my demands, there must be other problems I have never thought of. But I will never regret.