correct me please.
Adults are explicitly included as a target group based in a training course at community level, composed by elderly people, women and men which don’t have computer knowledge, and they are presenting communicating difficulties and foreign language anxiety, this group lose their self confidence in improve their skills.
On the other hand this course has a lack of interactive activities with the use of TICs, and the guidebook have dialogues and oral activities but it is not enough to solve the anxiety and communicating problems.
Thank you.
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correct me please.
Adults are explicitly included as a target group based in on a training course at the community level, composed by of elderly people [=senior citizens], and women and men which who don’t have computer knowledge.*, and When they are presenting presented with communicationng difficulties and foreign language anxiety, this group [=demographic] loses their its** self-confidence in its ability to improve their its skills.
On the other hand, this course has a lack of interactive activities with the use of TICs, and the guidebook have has*** dialogues and oral activities, but it is not enough to solve the anxiety and communicationng problems.
Thank you.
*There are several ideas running together in this sentence: composition of target group, their difficulties with technology and how they respond to these difficulties. So, it's better to break these up into two sentences for coherence.
**Group is a collective singular.
***Guidebook is singular.
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oh! yes, thank you.
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En la última frase del primer párrafo, me parece que quedaría mejor expresado en pasado: this group lost their self confidence in improving their skills, no sé
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