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My journey
I feel am feeling depressed. I am a professor teacher and today I was very hard (did you mean angry?) with the children. They are were very exited and really pushed me to the limit . Nevertheless I have had a lot of patience! I just wanted just to say that.
** You can use naughty or restless instead of using Excited, and when you're using past tense write the whole occurrence in past tense. **
My journey
I feel depressed [or "discouraged"]. I am a professor and today was very hard with the children. They are very exited excitable* and really pushed me to the limit . Nevertheless I have a lot of patience! I wanted just to say that.
*"Excitable" is a better word to use here instead of "excited" because it means that they were quick to be excited/stirred up. It indicates a repeated pattern of behavior instead of a one-time occurrence. Hence, it was very difficult to have to keep calming them down and getting them to focus, causing your depression.
My journey
I feel depressed. I am a teacher and today was very hard with the children. They were very excitable and really pushed me to the limit . Nevertheless I have a lot of patience! I wanted just to say that.
Hi Sophie.
One minor correction on top of that given above. If you're working with children, the job title is probably teacher. Professor is reserved for a position at a university.
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