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Please, check my letter of motivation. I suggest there a many mistakes. Please, help me to correct them :) I think, I’m crazy. In good sense. I can not be in calm. If I have some free time I immediately create an activity for what I will be spending this time. What drives me? I call it «the desire for life». Sometimes I feel upset because there are too many beautiful and interesting things in life I will never have a chance to know about ! Currently, I study at the university (writing a thesis), word as a dance teacher for children, being a tutor of sociology for a pupils (help with preparing for the state exam), learning art of stage improvisation and play a big role in lives of my friends and family. And I actively search for a further education. I feel I’m not ready for career building but I’m in ideal condition for continuing studying, for gaing professional and intellectual skills. And other crazy ideas don’t stop coming in my head. So, it drives me. The desire of life.

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Please, check my letter of motivation.

I suggest there a many mistakes.
Please, help me to correct them :)

I think I am crazy in a good way.
I cannot be calm. If I have some free time I immediately think of a way of spending the time. What drives me? I call it «the desire for life».
Sometimes I feel upset because there are too many beautiful and interesting things in life I will never have a chance to know about!
Currently, I study at a university (writing a thesis), work as a dance teacher for children, am a tutor of sociology for pupils (helping them to prepare for the state exam), am learning the art of stage improvisation and play a big role in the lives of my friends and family. I also actively search for further education. I feel I’m not ready for building a career but I’m in ideal condition for continuing studying, and for gaining professional and intellectual skills.
And other crazy ideas don’t stop coming into my head
So, it drives me - the desire of life.

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