my family

I love my family. there are five members in my family : my father, my mother, my younger sister, my younger brother. they always care for me very much. everyday, my mother gets up at 4.30 a.m. she brushes her teeth,washes her face and cooks some rice. next she goes to market and begin the work of a shopkeeper at 5.15 a.m. at 5a.m my father gets up. he does the excise and then,he takes the forage for chikens,a cow, two buffalos. at 6 a.m he calls me to get up. I and my younger sister,my younger brother get up. then, we eat breakfast with some foot by my father cooked. at 6.30 a.m we go to school. my father is a teacher. he teaches in a primary school,so he is very patienty. He looks after my family very good. from time to time, he gets up late and that time, I understand that he is sick. so, i and my sister must take a meal for my family cattle.that is very difficult while the person to do it everyday is my father... he is very important in our life... i love my family very much, love all the member ...! I hope everyone has a good life...

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Can I just say, great job! You did great and you did not make many mistakes or errors and you know a lot of words in English! Plus, the errors you did make were not big ones, they were little ones like leaving out 'the' or something like that. You did a really good job!