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BIRTHDAY’S PARTY Today is Bob’s birthday. It’s a special moment for him because he becomes fifty years old. He loves the mountains and the snow so he wants to celebrate this day in a small place located at an altitude of almost 2000 meters. It’s for about a month that he had worked for this; he had tried to do all his best to make this day very special for him and all the people that comes with. I saw him many times in the last few days and he always looked like worried. He sometimes asked me for having some advices or knowing my opinion about what you had organized. I’m proud of this because I could help him about this party. Bob isn’t a too common man, he’s very shy, especially with women; sometimes his way of acting makes him quite queer and unpleasant but I know that it’s only for his shyness, probably because I’m quite shy too. He still lives with his parents but he should find a girl that could make his life better. Everyone needs a person to stay with: it’s the human nature.

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BIRTHDAY’S PARTY

Today is Bob’s birthday. It’s a special moment for him because he becomes fifty years old. He loves the mountains and the snow so he wants to celebrate this day in a small place located at an altitude of almost 2000 meters. It’s for about a month that he had worked for this; he had tried to do all he could his best to make this day very special for him and all the people that comes with. I saw him many times in the last few days and he always looked like worried. He sometimes asked me for having some advices or knowing my opinion about what he you had organized. I’m proud of this because I could help him with about this party. Bob isn’t a too common man, he’s very shy, especially with women; sometimes his way of acting makes him quite queer and unpleasant but I know that it’s only for his shyness, probably because I’m quite shy too. He still lives with his parents but he should find a girl that could make his life better. Everyone needs a person to stay with: it’s the human nature.

 

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BIRTHDAY’S PARTY

Today is Bob’s birthday. It’s a special moment for him because he turns fifty years old. He loves the mountains and the snow so he wants to celebrate the day in a small place located at an altitude of almost 2000 meters. He has worked for this for about a month. He had tried to do all his best to make this day very special for him and all the other people that are coming. I saw him many times in the last few days and he always looked like worried. He sometimes asked me for having some advice or knowing for my opinion about what he had organized. I’m proud of this because I could help him with this party. Bob isn’t a confident man, he’s very shy, especially with women; sometimes his way of acting makes him quite queer and unpleasant but I know that it’s only because of/due to his shyness, probably because I’m quite shy too. He still lives with his parents but he should find a girl that could make his life better. Everyone needs a person to stay with: it’s the human nature.

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