Corrections · 2
Outing
I am going for an outing with some friends where we will eat barbecue and go bike riding. My friends/I also have a dog that we will walk. These outings make me very happy because I like my friends. They are always very kind people who often help me. I love them and hope we are always together.
It is spring now which is a very good season; not too hot, not too cold, just very cozy. I am from the city of Chengdu which is located/situated in southwest China. It is very famous, and a popular place of residence. It is also the hometown of the giant panda.
I’m not sure of your meaning with the term/phrase “welcome to play”, so I did my own research and discovered that Chengdu is a very popular city of China and I thought that maybe this is what you were trying to say. Apart from this, I understood the rest of your story, especially the feelings you expressed. Your skills will continue to develop with practice. Well done.
Outing
I like my friends
They are very kind people usually.They often help me!I love them and I hope we are always together !
Spring is very a good season, not hot, not cold - very cozy! In china, my city is a very famous city of residence, (welcome to play?) It is in southwest China, the hometown of giant pandas. The name of the city is Chengdu!
For this part: I'll go on an outing with some friends ,We eat barbecue, bike riding, walking the dog, very happy!
I'm not sure whether you're explaining something you WILL do, or something you HAVE done in the past.
So to explain something you will do, you would say:
I am going to go on an outing with some friends. We WILL eat barbeque, ride bikes, walk the dogs...
Want to progress faster?
Join this learning community and try out free exercises!
Don’t miss out on the opportunity to learn a language from the comfort of your own home. Browse our selection of experienced language tutors and enroll in your first lesson now!
Start Learning Today
