When you left
did you not take with you intentionally
the hole
that your head left
in the pillow
Whereas I used to trust
our love
as much as the accuracy of
the clock
in the ferry quay or train station
Only mom left me
like you did
I still have on my belly
the hole
left to me
from her absence
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When you left
did you not take with you intentionally
the hole
that your head left
in the pillow
Whereas I used to trust
our love
as much as the accuracy of
the clock
in the ferry quay or train station
Only mom left me
like you did
I still have in my belly
the hole
left to me
from her absence
Excellent! I only changed "on" to "in"
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