First notebook entry: Introducing myself
My name is ZhangYan.I am studying at Fujian Nomal University.I am a post-graduate.ShanXi province is my pays natual.My dream is do an excellent biological teacher in middle school which could make me feel cozy when I standing on the platform.My English is not good,so I have not been passing CET6.This situation still make me feel bad and embarrasse.I know the level of English is very important to my future job.Although this fact looks so frustrate,I still wonder enhance my English level.And I wish pass CET6 examenation in 18th. Dec. next month.
As my part,though time and effort,the level of my English could have a great progress.
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First notebook entry: Introducing myself
My name is ZhangYan. I am studying at Fujian Nomal University.I am a post-graduate student. ShanXi province is my home province. My dream is to be an excellent biology teacher in middle school, which would make me feel good (或 “good inside“) when I stand on the stage （舞台）. My English is not good, so I have not been passing （或 have not (yet) passed ) the CET6. This situation makes me feel bad and embarrassed. I know my English level is very important for my future job. Although this seems so frustrating, I still think (或believe 或expect to）I can improve my English level.And I hope i can pass CET6 examination on Dec. 18th (美國這樣說， 但也許英國說18th Dec）.For my part(?), through spending time and making (an) effort (“through time and effort” 也可以) , my English level will improve greatly
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There is no saying "as my part" - I can think of "for my part" and "as for me" which are similar. I think "for my part" does make sense here, but you can drop it.
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高兴认识你YAN. Yes, "for my part" has a similar meaning to "in my opinion". Actually you do not need to write that. You can also write "Through spending time and effort, I hope my English will improve" and that would be fine too.
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Does for my part not mean in my opinion?
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thank you very much,teacher.i will study harder than before.
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