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Can somebody help me with this text? Hi everyone, I've tried to write this text for a friend of mine who owns a company of fabrics in Majorca but I'm not pretty sure if is sounds natural or is very forced. Please, can somebody help me to correct this? I'd really appreciated! The essence of the products "Pepito" are based on the use of raw materials: fabrics compounds for cotton and linen as Majorcan Fabrics that are full of rich design in details and assorted colors. The fabrics of natural fibre somehow connect me with the different landscapes of Majorca. They help me to create a link between "Pepito" and the island. In this way I can transmit my feelings and work to the people. It is because of this reason that it is very important the selection of the fabrics, textures and colors. My wish is that the person that acquires a "Pepito"'s product feels through them a physical and emotional sensation and experience that create a link with the island, Somehow like taking with him a slice of Majorca. I`ve tried to create a product line rich in details, textures and simplicity but with an actual touch. All process from dyeing until the finished product is an exhaustive and semi-artisnal work. This is the fundamental base of the Brand, transmit the feeling for the noble materials and the pleasure for an artisan work.

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Can somebody help me with this text?

Hi everyone, I've tried to write this text for a friend of mine who owns a company of fabrics in Majorca but I'm not pretty sure if is sounds natural or is very forced.

Please, can somebody help me to correct this? I'd really appreciated!


The essence of the products "Pepito" products are is based on the use of natural raw materials: Linen and cotton fabrics compounds for cotton and linen. as, in particularMajorcan Fabrics that are full of rich design, in details and assorted colors.

The fabrics of natural fibre fabrics somehow connect me with the different landscapes of Majorca. They help me to create a link between "Pepito" and the island. In this way I can communicate my feelings and work to the people (do you mean customers, consumers or people?) It is therefore because of this reason that it is The selection of fabrics, textures and colours is therefore very important the selection of the fabrics, textures and colors.

My wish It's my desire that is that the person customer, client? that acquires purchases a "Pepito"'s product feels through them a physical and emotional sensation  and experience that creates a link with the island: somehow like taking with him a slice of Majorca with them. 

I`ve tried to create a product line rich in details, textures and simplicity but with an actual touch. All processes from dyeing until the finished product, is an exhaustive and semi-artisnal work.

this is  Thus the fundamental base basis of the Brand transmits the feeling for the noble quality materials and the pleasure for an of owning a piece of artisan work.

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