“What you hear you forget, what you see you remember, what you do you learn”.
Human talent is diverse, and for this reason from an inclusive school, where inequalities are removed and differences are noticed, we should guarantee equal opportunities for everyone. One of the problems that are reported is the frustration of the students who are not motivated, and they don’t find satisfaction, or emotion in what they are taught at school, so we must encourage creativity, to work for hop and the passion. Education must be based on knowing each of our students, their motivations and interests, how they learn and develop their potential in that way.
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“What you hear you forget, what you see you remember, what you do you learn.”. (Pongamos el punto dentro de los comillas.)
Human talent is diverse, and for this reason from in an inclusive school, where inequalities are removed and differences are noticed and even celebrated, we should guarantee equal opportunities for everyone. Lack of student motivation is a frequently-reported problem: students One of the problems that are reported is the frustration of the students who are not motivated, and they don’t find satisfaction in or passion for, or emotion in what they are taught at school,. so wWe must encourage creativity, to work for hope and the passion. Education must be based on knowing each of our students, their motivations and interests, and how they learn and develop their potential in that way.
Very interesting ideas and well done, Gema! There are several ways you could express these ideas to make the English sound a little more natural, so I chose one way.
Jean
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Overall this was very good. I would suggest trying to keep your sentences a little more simple. Some of the sentences kept going on, continued on, and had some more added. There are ways to combine many words into one complete "thought." However, keep focus on that "thought." When you begin a new "thought" it is best to start a new sentence. I hope these comments are helpful. Good luck!
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