Dreams and reality

In my life, i always confuse my dreams with reality. When i'm on the way i'm always thinking about my dreams with a smile on my face. But there is a voice saying: hey! wake up, its not your real life. Well, i come back to real life and smile is gone.
but i still love my life and i hope someday i will accomplish my dreams. My teacher said: keep going in your life, wait the chance and one day you will achieve your dreams.

Dreams and reality

In my life, I frequently confuse dreams with reality. When I think that I'm dreaming, I'm smiling. But I hear a voice, saying: "Hey! Wake up! That's not your real life!" I come back to reality, and my smile is gone.

But I still love my life, and I hope one day I can achieve my dreams. My teacher said, "Keep living, and wait for that chance, and one day you will achieve [it]."

(請記你說英文的時候，而引述，用「 " 」在摘引的開始和結束。）^_^

(Please remember when you're quoting someone in English to use the " mark at the beginning and end of a quote.) :)

Dream and Reality

In my real life, I always confuse with dreams with reality. When i on the way that i always thinking my dreaming , I am dreaming, and I always have a smile on my face, but then I listen hear a voice  saying "Hey! weak Wake up! This is its not your real life." Then well I come back to real life wake up and the smile was is gone from my face.

but I still love my life and but I hope I can finish achieve my dreams in some day. My teacher said to keep going on with your my life, and to wait for that chance, and that one day you I will be achieve them.

dream and reality

In my life ,i always confuse with dream and reality.when i on the way that i always thinking my dreaming ,and smile on my face.but i listen voice ,saying :hey! weak up its not your real life. well i come back real life ,and smile was gone.
but i still love my life and i hope i can finish my dream in someday.my teacher said :keep going your life ,and wait that chance,and one day you will be achieve.

Dreams and Reality

In my life, I always confuse dreams with reality. When I am dreaming, I am always thinking about my dream with a smile on my face. Then, I hear a voice saying, "Hey! Wake up! It's not your real life." I come back to life and my smile is gone. Even though my smile is gone, I still love my life and I hope I can finish my dream someday. My teacher said, "Keep going in your life, wait for that chance, and one day you will achieve."

The comma and colon goes after the first word such as:

correct: life, and

wrong :life ,and

:)