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My day One of my goals to improve my english is to write an entre on Italky everyday, so I'm here thinking about what to write. Well, maybe it's not very interesting, but I don't care. This morning I have woke up a bit earlier than usual due I had to go the drugstore to pick some cosmetics up wich I ordered the day before. Now that I am thinking about that, I did something before, yes, I remember, I took some money out of the ATM because I didn't cash to pay my stuff. Later I got my cosmetics I went to my boyfriend's house who lives nor far away from the pharmacy, just five or six minutes walking. I found him playing "Resident Evil" on the PS3, one of my favorite video games, so I coldn't avoit it and started playing with him. I meant, I joined to his game. Although I love video games, I must confess that I am lousy, so my character was badly hurt nearly always. But I don't mind, just go on playing so happy. After finishing the game, we went to have luch outdoor due the day was superb.

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My day

One of my goals to improve my English is to write an entre on Italky (Italki) everyday, so I'm here thinking about what to write. Well, maybe it's not very interesting, but I don't care.

This morning I have woke up a bit earlier than usual due because I had to go the drugstore to pick some cosmetics up which I had ordered the day before.

Now that I am thinking about that, I did something before, yes, I remember, I took some money out of the ATM because I didn't have cash to pay for my stuff.

Later, after I got my cosmetics, I went to my boyfriend's house who lives nor not far away from the pharmacy, just five or six minutes walking.
I found him playing "Resident Evil" on the PS3, one of my favorite video games, so I couldn't avoid it and started playing with him. I meant, I joined to his game.

Although I love video games, I must confess that I am lousy, so my character was badly hurt nearly always every game. But I don't mind, just go on playing so happy (I just enjoyed playing).


After finishing the game, we went to have lunch outdoors due because the day (the weather) was superb.

 

Great to meet you, Sara! I also love video games, but sometimes I can be a really terrible player. I think your writing is quite good (a couple of typos here and there, but that's to be expected!). I hope you continue to write more!

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你好,你还要加强中文吗?我英语不好,我们可不可以互相帮助呢?
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Amazing writing, Sara. I love RE5 so badly that I got its Platinum Trophy Lol. You're doing great with the language and soon it will be much better. If you wish I could help you once in a while. As an observation I could tell you that the word "due" would be like "deuda"; there's also "due to" but it means "debido a que (...)". By the context I would infer you wanted to say: "So" (Así que). :D

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