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Exercise of writing - IELTS (number 1)

I wrote my first notebook of practice test IELTS. Attached here the exercise. I did not use the dictionary. Thank you so much for your help!

The figures show him many how much time men and women between the age of 21 and 40 spent on leisure activities in USA. There are significantly differences between the use of leisure time by men and women, although both spent in overall per week similar amount of time spent a similar amount of time in total each week: 33.3 hours by men, and 33.7 by women.

The differences begin with the distribution of this time in between the different leisure activities: the men spent in USA more time watching TV and using the internet (16.2 hours per week) than women (9.2 hours per week). The figures indicate that women spent more time in activities described as 'other leisure at home', 10.6 hours per week, in contrast with men who spent just 8.6 hours in these this activities.

Surprisingly, the figures reveal that women spent more time in leisure activities outside of the house, such as sports and walking, eating out, going to cinema and pubs, and socialising than men. In a week, the women spent 13.3 in these activities, while the men spent 8.5 hours. The data demonstrates that women are more active activity than mens, who prefer leisure activities at home.
In conclusion, the figures demonstrate that the American men and women between 21 and 40 years old practice leisure activities frequently, but not activities that require physical exercises. The difference between the genders is markedly There is a marked difference between the genders.