Cover Letter

Hi guys,

I'm a communication manager. The problem is that my native language is Polish, so I need to improve skill my language abilityies (language skill/language ability, pick either. Only singular, in this case english)to the a higher level to be able to work in workload I want. Could you help me with my cover letter? Many thanks if you give me some advice. I will look for job in UK. Different market - different expectation. :-) Thank you!




Efficiency is my priority at work. I am Highly experienced in management, and excellent in at building work - orientated relationships. I am an adaptable team player with a pro-active attitude, creativity and ability to easily solve all type of difficulties. I can be am proud of my unique communication and interpersonal skills.

I posses have (posses is for something tangible7property) an exceptional sense of observation and put a lot of attention to study the task I work on. Analysis, market research, time and social media management are the tools, I use on daily basis. I posses have wide knowledge within networking, business development, business psychology and entrepreneurship. I brought to perfection my pro - customer attitude.

A very professional manner and excellent presentation are skills which helping me within a demanding workload to deal with the workload demand. I have got a proven track record within project and human resources management. I am great in good at (sometimes exagerating is not good for cover letter too) organising, coordinating work, communicating with office staff and taking a part in negotiation with customers and business partners. I was involved in many different projects withing in ("involve" always followed by "in") marketing, advertising, leisure, personal development, sales and consulting. I always give my full attention to each single project I work on.

I am self-motivated and pay attention to detail. I regard myself as job focused, assiduous, flexible and a fast quick learner. While managing the model agency, I got to know all photographers and make up artist back-up and tricks. I was coaching trained the models who were taking part in a fashion events. I knew in person all clients. Cooperation Cooperating with a new business partners as well as being a master of ceremony or an anchorperson, were always exciting.

I look for a job position within in a company, where I could can be involved in building it through personal and workplace skills I have posses. I would like to witness the company grow because of our everyday hard everyday work. I can work as assistant, secretary secretarial office worker, consultant, nevertheless I am open for any suggestion and advice.

Djyin Dobry!!!!

A very great letter i might say, so strong and confident!

Full of complex sentences, and meticulous explanations.

A little bit difficult to give correction since i do not really get what do you actually want to say, and am afraid of changing any sense of your sentences.

Any way, its a very Great job!

Few important suggestions

1. Review the preposition topic in English, where and when to use within, in, on, at.

2. Exagerating is often not a good idea for a cover letter, infact it should be as concise as possible. Avoid using extra work which is not really necessary. This letter would tell how effective you would be doing your job.

3. I dont really agree with your first sentence saying that the problem is your native language is Polish or whatever. Many people out there are struggling to learn your language too. You are suppose to be proud of it, that you are able to speak and understand english but your native is Polish.

When i was backpacking, i met many polish, the were very amazing, very kind, easy going, with their unique sweet and sexy english. But once, i was so sorry when i said to a polish girl "your language (polish) is so crunchy and sweet and sounds like Russian". She replied "no, no, no. You have just turned me off, ours is different to Russian and ours is more beautiful". Then i laughed hard and said sorry to her.

Powodzenia!!!!