Why do I want to do an English course in Ireland?

When I think of Ireland, a lot of things come to my mind. The country of U2, the Guinness, Saint Patrick... In my opinion, the real question is: Why would I not want to do an English course in Ireland?! <38>

Clearly, the perfect city to learn English is Dublin. After some obligatory hours of lessons, there are a lot of things to do. You can't get bored in the capital of "The emerald Isle". <35>
There are a great deal of legends to hear about while you are drinking some good Irish beer and looking at the amazing landscape. Also, the good weather in summer is another reason to look forward to being  in Ireland this summer.

It would be great to visit the Liffey river, the place where vikings first invaded the country. <55>
I want to hear the famous Irish accent, because in TV series and films I have only heard the English and American accents. I would like that someone with this accent to say this famous sentence to me: "four seasons in one day". <43>

A lot of friends of mine, who have been to Ireland, have talked to me about the openness and the friendliness of the Irish people. I would be glad to meet Irish people in pubs and practise English with them. Also, like I love sports, so it would be fantastic to watch a rugby match.<54>
To summarise, and to conclude, I hope I will be able to enjoy visiting this great country and also improve my English in the process. Thank you!

Ok, that's the composition that I had to write and hopefully I will be able to go to Dublin for free! So please correct my entry!

P.S.: I have included a picture where you can see how happy I would be if I win this scholarship :) Thanks!

I really hope you get it!

Let me know if you'd like to exchange via Skype one day!

All the best!

Zé

Great job! I just included the few extra suggestions that I didn't see in Zé's correction. Good luck and hope you get that scholarship.

Why do I want to do an English course in Ireland?

When I think in Ireland, a lot of things come to my mind. The country of U2, the Guinness, Saint Patrick... In my opinion, the cuestion is: Why do not I want to do an English course in Ireland? <38>
Clearly, the perfect city to learn English is Dublin. After some neccesary hours of classes, there are a lot of things to do and don't get bored in the capital of "The emerald Isle". <35>
There are a great deal of leyends to heard while you are drinking some good Irish beer and looking at the amazing landscape. Also, the good weather in the summer is another reason to looking forward to be this summer in Ireland.
It would be great to visit the Liffey's river, whereby vikings invaded the country. <55>
I want to hear the famous Irish accent, because on the TV series and films I have only heard the English and American accent. I would like that someone with this accent said to me the famous sentence "four seasons in one day". <43>
A lot of friends of mine, who have been in Ireland, have talked to me about the closeness and the friendlilness of the Irish people. I would be glad to meet Irish people in pubs and practise English with them. Also, like I love sports, it would be fantastic to watch a rugby match.<54>
As a resume, and to conclude, I hope I could enjoy visiting this great country and improve my English. Thank you.

Ok, that's a writting that I have to do and maybe I will be to Dublin free. Please correct my entry. Pd: I show you a pic where you can see me so happy if I won win this scolarship :) Thanks

Why do I want to "take" an English course in Ireland?

When I think about Ireland, several things come to mind, including U2, Guinness Beer and Saint Patrick. In my opinion, the question should be: Why would I not want to take an English course in Ireland? 

Clearly, the perfect city to learn English is Dublin. After some necessary hours of class, there are a lot of entertaining things to do in order to avoid getting bored in the capital of "The Emerald Isle". 

There are a great deal of legends to discuss while you are drinking some good Irish beer and looking at the amazing landscape. The good summer weather is another reason to look forward to spending this summer in Ireland. (If you put also at, the beginning of the sentence, it sounds a little redundant since you put another in the sentence)

It would be great to visit Liffey's River, where vikings invaded the country.

I want to hear the famous Irish accent, because I've only heard British and American accents on TV and in films. I would like to hear someone say the famous sentence "four seasons in one day" in an Irish accent. 

A lot of my friends, who have been in Ireland, have told me how close and friendly the Irish people are. I would love to meet Irish people in pubs and practice English with them. I also love sports and think it would be fantastic to watch a rugby match.

To conclude, I hope to be able to visit this wonderful country and improve my English.

 Thank you.