Worrying for a friend

Dear John,

I can’t believe what you told me the other day. I have been in shock since then. But, Are you sure Agnes (is having / had) has an affair with Charles? Maybe they are only friends. Have you seen another e-mail or text message that makes you think you are right?

I think it is better you speak with her, and ask directly what is happening with Charles. If not, you will go crazy! I would have never expected this from Agnes.

You know I’m here for all you if you need it. Please don’t doubt in hesitate to calling me whenever you want. You are my best friend, and if you are sad, I’m sad too.

A thousand kisses.

9Worry for a friend

Dear John,

I can’t believe what you told me the other day. I have(I've) been in shock since then. But, are you sure Agnes has had (or - Agnes is having) an affair with Charles? Maybe they are (they're) only friends. Have you seen another e-mail or text message that makes you think you are (you're) right?

I think it is (it's) better if/that you speak with/to her, and ask her directly what is happening with Charles. If not, you will (you'll) go crazy! I would have never/never have expected this from Agnes.

You know I’m here for all if you need it  help (or You know I'm here for you if you need me). Don’t doubt  hesitate to in calling me whenever you want. You are my best friend, and if you are(you're) sad, I’m sad too.

A Thousand kisses.

It sounds more natural when talking to a friend to use the 'contractions' of the verbs - I am I have they are etc. On the phone, emails, sms etc - this is how we talk (usually).

Good work Mauri.