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Little Women Can you help me? this is a homework, a review. (the story is not complete, because they had to be 190 words) This book is a novel written by Louisa May Alcott. It’s located in New England, during the Civil War, between 1861 and 1865. It’s follows the lives of four sisters; Jo, Meg, Beth and Amy. As they go from childhood to adulthood The story start when the March's family is bankrupt and the father is in the war. Afterwards the family meet to Laurie, Jo and Laurie make friends. And they live a lot of experiences where all the family involve and grow up together. Jo moves to 73 New York, where she meets to Professor Bhaer. Later on they marry. When Jo comes back to her home Beth dies, Meg has twins and Amy marries to Laurie. Jo is the strongest of her sisters. she is the boyish of the family. She loves reading and writing. Meg is the oldest sister. she always take care of her sisters. Beth is shy, gentle and musical. she dies very young. Amy is the youngest sister. she is the artist of the family. i certainly recommend this book, It's inspiring to imagine how grow up the girls.

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Little Women

Can you help me? this is a homework assignment, a review. (the story is not complete, because it had to be 190 words)

This book is a novel written by Louisa May Alcott. It’s located in New England, during the Civil War, between 1861 and 1865.
It’s follows the lives of four sisters -- Jo, Meg, Beth and Amy -- as they go from childhood to adulthood.

The story starts with the March family bankrupt and the father in the war.
Afterwards, the family meets Laurie. Jo and Laurie make friends. And they have a lot of experiences involving the whole family in which they grow up together.
Jo moves to 73 (? I don't understand) New York, where she meets Professor Bhaer. Later on they marry.
When Jo comes back to her home (you could say this, but 'comes back home' sounds more natural) Beth dies, Meg has twins and Amy marries Laurie.

Jo is the strongest of her sisters. She is the boyish one in the family. She loves reading and writing. Meg is the oldest sister. She always take care of her sisters. Beth is shy, gentle and musical. She dies very young. Amy is the youngest sister. She is the artist of the family.

I certainly recommend this book. It's inspiring to imagine how the girls grow up.

 

Good job! One thing you might want to work on: in English (unlike in Spanish) we don't put 'to' after verbs like 'meet' or 'marry.' But good job. By the way, I love this book, I'm glad you enjoyed it too :)

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Seems like it is a nice story!

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