My first diving experience

ThatThis was my first diving experience at manta point and crystal bay Nusa Penida, Indonesia.

In the beginning I wanted to give up, I got such a panic attack because I didn’t tell the instructor that I had breathless lost my breath and I couldn’t breath breathe under in the water. Furthermore, I just dove could dive in 3 meters due to the fact that I couldn’t equalize do equalizing and and it made my left ear hurt. so much pain in my left ears.

It was difficult taft, I’ve never faced with the my fear like this before. I really do love do extreme sports and also water sports, and I even put Diving in on my DREAM list papers, but on at that time I really wanted to give up.

Those men (my instructor and the provider’s owner, sorry I forgot the name, Pffffttt..!!), they gave me a faith to do that. Their patience allowed me to not hesitate. with their patience so that I could do that with no hesitate :)).

And last but not least, There was one another other man who helped me, Brother Reno. He gave me a priceless trick to do equalizing and that's what really worked.  that was really work at all. I could even dive till 9 meters. It was Awesome the best experience in on my last trip!!

Btw, Thanks thank God for saving my life on that time,

My first diving

This was my first diving at Manta Point and Crystal Bay in Nusa Penida, Indonesia.

In the beginning I wanted to give up. I got such a panic attack because I didn’t tell the instructor that I had breathlessness and I couldn’t breath in the water. Furthermore, I could only dive 3 meters because I couldn’t equalize and it made a lot of pain in my left ear.

It was daft, I’ve never faced a fear like this before. I really love do extreme sport and also water sports. I even put Diving in my DREAM list, but on this occassion I really wanted to give up.

Those men (my instructor and the provider’s owner, sorry I forgot his name, Pffffttt..!!) gave me  faith to continue with their patience so that I could do that with no hesitation :)).

And last but not least, there was one another man who helped me, Brother Reno. He gave me a priceless trick to equalize and it really worked well. I could even dive until 9 meters. It was awesome - the best experience in my last trip!

Btw, thank God for saving my life that time.

American English Corrections

My First Time Diving

This was my first diving experince at Manta Point and Crystal Bay (Proper nouns need to be capitalized) in Nusa Penida, Indonesia.

At first, I wanted to give up. I got such a panic attack because I couldn't tell the instructor that I had lost my breath and I couldn't breathe under (the) water. Furthermore, since I couln't equalize the pressure in my ears properly, I experienced (or "had") a lot of pain in my left ear and was only able to dive as far down as 3 meters.

It was tough (or "was difficult" or "wasn't easy"). I’ve never faced a fear like this before. I really love to do (or "really love doing") extreme sports and also watersports; I even put diving on my DREAM list papers list of things I really want to do at least once (We don't call it a "dream list paper". How I have written it here is how we would say this naturally though.), but at that time, I really wanted to give up.

Those men The diving school's owner, sorry but I forget his name, and my instructor they both gave me  a faith to do the strength that I needed to complete the dive with their patience and encouragement. so that I could do that with no hesitate :)).

And last but not least, there was one other man there who helped me, Brother Reno. He gave me a priceless trick to equalize pressure and it really worked well. I could even dive up to 9 meters after that. It was awesome- by far the best experience during my last trip!!

Btw, thank God for saving my life on that time.

I placed optional words in green. :)