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cOOx's translation is excellent. It only needs a very few tweaks (minor changes).
Corrections in red. Stylistics in blue.
My name is Ira, and I'm the mother of a five-years-old boy whose name is Yair. I like traveling and discovering new countries and cultures. I love the country I live in. I love the sea, the mountains and the sun.
I like to get back home after the working day, which passes by without being noticed. I have a wonderful group of coworkers, and it's a pure pleasure to work with them.
Besides, I like painting, and I can do it round the clock.
This has been a very short introduction. To sum up, life is beautiful in its every single way, and I'm happy that I'm alive!
Good variant: "... , and I'm happy to be alive!
Вольный перевод, не претендующий на точность и грамматическую корректность. =)
My name is Ira, and I'm the mother of a five-years-old boy whose name is Yair. I like traveling and discovering new countries and cultures. I love the country I live in. I love the sea, mountains and the sun.
I like to get back home after working day, which passes by without being noticed. I have a wonderful collective of coworkers and it's the pure pleasure to work with them.
Besides, I like painting, I can do it round the clock.
This has been a very short introduction. To sum up, life is beautiful in its every single way, and I'm happy that I live!
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