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My country Hello friends I am going to write about my country. I you want to travel around my country, you need summer clothes because, in my country, it is hot. My advice is that you should visit south of Spain. I think it is a zone with good food, and differents cities for to meet. There are many museums and sculptures. You can make beautiful photos. In my opinion, the most beautiful city is Seville. Seville has squares, short streets and a famous cathedral. In North of Spain, you can visit Barcelona or differents basques cities. I think its is the most important. Maybe, it will rain so, you need winter clothes. If you prefer to visit cities which are near to sea, you can travel to Valencia. You can try valencian rice and see the Fallas. Fallas is the most important party in Valencia. People burn a big monuments. This monuments are made with wood. I live in Seville, if you want to visit Seville, write me an email, or private message and I will show my city. Write soon, Alberto. [[Please, if you correct me, can you mark me between 1(bad)-5(excellent), please? Thank you!]]

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My country

Hello friends

I am going to write about my country. If you want to travel around my country, you need summer clothes, because in my country, it is hot. My advice is that you should visit south of Spain. I think it is a zone with good food, and differents cities to visit. There are many museums and sculptures. You can make beautiful photos. In my opinion, the most beautiful city is Seville. Seville has squares, short streets and a famous cathedral.

In North of Spain, you can visit Barcelona or different Basque cities. I think they are the most important. It may rain, so you need winter clothes.

If you prefer to visit cities which are near to sea, you can travel to Valencia. You can try valencian rice and see the Fallas. Fallas is the most important party in Valencia. People burn big monuments. These monuments are made with wood.

I live in Seville. If you want to visit Seville, write me an email, or private message and I will show my city. 

Write soon,

Alberto.

[[I give you a 4 out of 5. Your English is very good! Just remember that we don't pluralize adjectives.]]

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