short parts of a letter of motivation

* My strengths are sales and a success orientated approach, so I was responsible for providing complex reports containing periodic analysis of our activity and supporting other managers in maintaining high quality services. With these analyses, we not only used to make important decisions, but also to keep our co-workers committed and enthusiastic about their jobs.

* I possess extensive knowledge of physiology, biomechanics and anatomy. I am currently working as a trainer of such materials teaching about their application in new trends, such as pilates and yoga. Therefore, I could energize, lead groups, conduct individual workouts and any activity directed as well as being passionate about the industry, and have great ability to conduct recreational activities.

*I believe in the project you want to develop because, among other advantages, it is based on a human factor creating a "true fidelity system."

short parts from a motivation letter

* My strengths are in sales and in a success-oriented approach. I was responsible for providing complex reports containing periodic analyses (the plural of analysis is analyses) of our activity and supporting other managers in maintaining high quality services. We used these analyses to take important decisions and (Rewriting this part sounds more direct and to the point...important in a resume/CV) to keep our co-workers committed and enthusiastic about their jobs.

* I possess extensive knowledge of physiology, biomechanics and anatomy. I am currently working as a trainer in this area teaching about their application in new trends, such as in pilates and in yoga. Therefore, I could energize others, lead groups, conduct individual workouts and do any activity directed. I am passionate about the industry, and I have a great ability to attract recreational activities.

*I believe in the project you want to develop because, among other advantages, it is based on a (maybe you could replace "a" with "the" to be more specific) human factor creating a "true fidelity system ."