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Today‘s activity Today has been a clear day. My family has gone to the small park in our neighborhood as usual. As it is early spring, some trees are getting green. In fact, this is kind of communication chance. Parents and grandparents in the community usually bring their children there. In most time, it is grandparents who take care of kids, but my family is an exception. Both my parents and parents-in-law are not in Beijing, just because they have their own business at hometown. Therefore, my wife looks after our two babies during weekdays, and I help her on weekends. My son and I were playing basketball as usual. This is a great sport, and a easy way to be famous. But we just play it for fun, and I do not expect my son would become a super player in the future. In fact, unlike most of Chinese parents who wish their only child to be well-known or rich, I am willing to see my son would have a happy life and be able to do what he would like to do.He should have his own life and be able to decide his own business. What I can do is provide plenty of choice for him. My immigration plan is for this purpose. Living in Chinese is hopeless, and I expect he would not lead a life as me. Since I went to school at childhood, the only thing I have do is study and work. I do them not because I like it , rather because I have to do. I do not know what is the meaning of life since I have had no my own choice at all.

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Today‘s activity

Today has been a clear day. My family has gone to the small park in our neighborhood as usual. As it is early spring, some trees are getting green. In fact, this is kind of communication chance. (Meaning is unclear here). Parents and grandparents in the community usually bring their children there. Most of the time, it is grandparents who take care of kids, but my family is an exception. Both my parents and parents-in-law are not in Beijing, because they have their own business at their hometowns. Therefore, my wife looks after our two babies during weekdays, and I help her on weekends.
My son and I were playing basketball as usual. This is a great sport, and a easy way to be famous. But we just play it for fun, and I do not expect my son would become a superstar player in the future. In fact, unlike most of Chinese parents who wish their only child to be well-known or rich, I am willing to see my son would have a happy life and be able to do what he would like to do.He should have his own life and be able to decide his own business.
What I can do is provide plenty of choice for him. My immigration plan is for this purpose. Living in China is hopeless, and I expect he would not lead a life as mine. Since I went to school at in my childhood, the only thing I have do is study and work. I do them not because I like it , rather because I have to do. I do not know what is the meaning of life since I have not had no my own choice at all.

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yes, exactly. Thank you!
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On that part where Michelle said your meaning is unclear: I think what you want to say is "In fact, this is an opportunity for us to get out and talk with our neighbors." or "In fact, this is a chance for us to socialize with others in our community."
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You are a great father to recognize that your kids have to choose their own ways in life. I wish you the best of luck with immigrating and making a better life for yourself!

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